Friday, 12 January 2018

One shot : HUM BEWAFA HARGIZ NA THE (AR)

This thing came to my mind many times,I never liked the way ridhima's character was potrayed..so here is my version of DMG end...
do give ur view guys....
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The story starts from the point where ridhima choses sid and asks armaan to leave..After hearing ridhimas decision armaan beIng heartbroken leaves from there and resigns from sanjeevani, no one knew where he went ,he just vanished from heir lives.

2 years later...LONDON

We see a handsome man walking in the par looking at the kid playing there lovingly, but spark in his eyes , the gleam of happiness is missing...Looking at the kids a tear fall from his eyes remembering his love...thinking

Ar- kaha se kaha pohuch gya basket, kya socha tha aur zindagi kaha le aayi..chah kr bhi tumhe bhula nhi saktabasket na tumse nafrat kr sakta hoon..kya itna kamzr tha humara rishta, kya bas itna hi pyar tha, itna aasan tha tumhare liye kisi aur ko chunna..dimmag kehta h ki tumhe bhula doon , itni nafrat karoon ki chah ke bhi tumhari yaaad nhi aaye par ye dil ye saala manta hi nhi...aaj bhi harwaqt tumhari khushiyon ki dua mangta hu...tareekh dekhna chod diya h, raat se nafrat ho gyi h muhe...jab raat aati h yahi sochta hu kit um waha apne pati ke saath hogi aur ...kyun kiya aisa ridhima tumne kyunn...

His thoughts were broken when someone called him from behind...


Ra- are arman tu yaha baitha h aur main kabse tujhe dhund raha...(yes he is none other than rahooolll...2 years back wen armaan left sanjeevani he came to London , where he met his buddy, when rahul saw him he cannot believe he is seeing the same guy he used to fight with...when he came to know what happened he became his support in this time, the one to console him ,tryt make him smile,their bond became very strong)

But when he looked at his eyes he immediately understood, he sat beside him and said

Ra- kyun khud ko itni taqleef deta h tu wo bhi us insane ke liye jise teri koi parwah hi nhi...jisne terepyar ka mazak banake rakh diya...kya kuch nhi kiya tune uske liye par wo...

Ar- rahul plz ...

Ra- achaa theek h nhi bolta kuch uske bare me par plz tu khud ko sambhal armaan, kab tak aise jeeyega

Armaaan looked him with such emotions that rahul did'nt said anything further, he also knew the pain of living away from ur love but his pain is nt comparable to that of armaan.

Ra- accha chal tu ye sab chor aura b chal hospital jana h aaj kuch new doctors aa rhe h to unke saath meeting h...

They both went together to DRONA..one of the prestigious hospitals in London...

The head of the hospital - welcome dr armaan and dr rahul , its good u both r here early, our new doctor is just about to arrive, ohh there he is, plz welcome DR SIDDHANT MODI...

The name and face both shocked armaan and rahul ...for armaan  hs whole life of sanjeevani came infront of his eyes, he feared what is she is here...he wont be able to face the same pain again, he wont .,..

Si- hello doctors,(although he too was shocked but did'nt let show on his face)

After the into,,, doctors the head said plz introduce dr modi to the hospital and I hope dr modi u wll work as efficiently and wont face any problems...donot hesitate to ask for anything from dr mallik...and he left...

Armaan- hi sid...

Si- hi armaan

Ar ye h rahul h mera colleague aur mera best friend...

Si- hi dr rahul , nice to meet u..

Ar- tu yaha kaise??achanak..

Si- achanak nhi kaafi time se plan tha yaha shift hone ka...but paperworks me time lagta h fir visa and all...

Ar- shift???mtlb..

Si- main humehsa ke liye yaha shift ho gya hu armaan..

Now this came as a shock..rahul and armaan both were looking at him...

Ar-I mean that's nice..(hesitatingly)baaki sab kaise h..i mean ghar pe...

Si- tu  kiske bare me janna chahta h armaan..ridhima ke??

Ar- nhi main to bas aise hi...dekh galat mat samajh..

Si- tu aaj bhi nhi badla armaan..tu jo kehna chahta h tere chehre pe saaf dikhta h..khair tu ridhima ke bare me puch rha h  to mujhe nhi pata wo kaisi h..hum contact me nhi h..

Now this came as a huge bllow for both armaa and rahul..

Both contact me nhi h matlab...

Si- main ridhima se kyun contact me hounga armaan?

Ar- sid tu kya bolra mujhe kuch nhi samajhra..paheli me baat mat kr ...ridhima tumhari wife h to obviously tujhe pata hoga uske bare me...

Asked armaan fearing...don't know why a fear gripped his heart..right now he doesn't care how he is acting he just want to know that his basket Is safe .what the hell is sid talking..he was about to say when the next words of sid made his vision blur..the ground slipped beneath his feet..

Si- ridhima meri biwi nhi h armaan..WE R DIVORED...2 saal pehle humara divorce ho chukka h...
Ar- lekin kab aur kyun sid...??Aisa kya ho gya jo tumne ridhima ko akela chod diya..usne tumhe chuna tha tumpe bharosa kiya tha...mujhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha..sid ..why the hell did u  do this..

Si- tumhare sawalon ka koi jawab nhi h mere paas armaan ya ye samajhlo main sahi insane nhi hun tumhe jawab den eke liye..aur jaha tak rahi humare divorce ki baat to wo usi din ho gya tha jis din tumne sanjeevani chori thi..isse zyada main tumhe kuch nhi keh sakta...tumhe in sawalon ka jawab wahi de sakti h jiske liye tumne sanjeevani chori,jiske liye sabkuch chorkar tum yaha sabse dur aakar bas gye...

Ar- sid tum kya keh rheho..itna sab kuch hone ke baad..main waapis nhi jaa sakta...itni himmat nhi hai mujhme..bohut mushkil se maine khudko sambhala h...bohut mushkil se apni us life ko peeche chor hai maine...

Sid- aur ridhima ko???use bhi bhula diya hai tumne ?

Armaan averted his eyes...

Si- tumhari aur ridhima  ki ek ye bhi adat milti hai arman..tum dono jaldi jhoot nhi bol paate..tum kisi yakeen dilane ki koshish kr rhe ho kit um rudhima ko bhula chuke ho khudko ya mujhe..sab kehte hai  armaan tum is duniya me sabse zyada pyar tum ridhima se krte sabse acche se tum use pehchante ho..sabse acche se tum use samajhte ho...to tumse use samajhne me kaise bhul ho gyi armaan..???

Ar- sid plzzz(emotionally)sach kya h...?

Si- (he smiled)india waapis jaa armaan..tere har sawal ka jawab wahi hai..auur ek dost hone ke naate keh rha hoon is baar apne dimag kin hi balki dil ki sunna...goodluck..

(and he left)

Ar- rahul india ke liye job hi pehli flight hai book kr...

Ra- armaan r u sure..tu jaana chahta h?

Ar- mujhe sach jaana h rahul..har haal me janna h..

Ra- ok...

Next day both took flight and reached Mumbai in the evening...armaan was really very restless.he told rahul to call in sanjeevani and enquire about ridhima..there they came to know ridhima is now working from lonavla orphanage...so they both started their  journey next morning to lonavla...

At  evening in lonavla...

A girl is sitting in her room staring at the moon through her...(well whats going on in her mind)don't know why but she is feeling very restless yet calm...

A tear fell from her eyes and a word.. from her mouth but it felt as if it came through her soul...

Ri- armann...

She closed her eyes...as if trying to feel around...but he was gone her mind and heart screamed...

Ri- mujhe maaf krdo armaan...she said slowly...

don't know when she fell asleep looking at the moon...

Next morning...

Ridhima is sitting with a small girl ...

Sonu-didi aap fir kal royi na raat me...

Ri- nhi to..aapse kisne kaha..

So- haawww jhut did...jhut nhi bolte aapne hi hume sikhaya na...ab aapkyunbol rhe...kya hua didi apko firse aapke friend ki yaad aa ri thi..

Ridhima looked at the little girl and smiled...

Ri- accha baba sryy ab nhi bolungi jhut...aur haan yaad to aa rhi thi..

So- did aap fikar mat kro aapke jab ye dost aayenge na main unko bohut datoongi...ok

Ri ridhima smiled sadly...nt knowing what to say to this little girl that the person for whom her heart cries day and night will never come...she herself pushed him away...why only she knows that...

Suddenly the watchman came and said

Wa- dr ji aapse milne drshashank ji  aaye h...

Ri-(ridhima sighed )theek h aap unhe yahi garden me bhej dijiye...sony beta aap andar jaake aona homework complete kro ok..

So- ok didi.

As soon as sonu left shashank came there...

Ri aap fir kyun aaye hai yaha papa..aap mera decision jaante hai...fir kyun baar baar khud ko yaha aakar taqleef dete hai..

Sh- taqleef beta taqlee mujhe yaha aane me nhi balki tumhe yaha akela aise chorkar jaane me hoti h..akhir kab tak tum ayah akele rahogi..waha mumbai me abkuch chrkar yaha aakar akele rehna ye kaisa faisla h..

Ri papa plz hum bohut baar ye baat kr chuke h..main waapis nhi aana chahti...

Sh bas ridhima bohut ho gyi tumhari zid maine tumhari har zid maani h...bas aur nhi tum mere saath waapis chal rhi ho bas...

RI- papa..main waapis nhi aaongi..

Sh ye kaisa bachpana hai ridhima..mazaak banake rakhdiya h tune apni zindagi ka..sid se divorce le liya..aoni life puri spoil krli aura b yaha sabse dur aakar akele baithi..aakhir chahti kya ho tumm..i knw ye sab sirf armaan ki wajah se ho rha h..i know...

Ridhima closed her eyes and fist tightly trying to control her anger..not wanting to say anything to her father but...atlast finally...

Sh- us ladke ne tumhari zindagi barbad krdi..main humesha uske bare me sahi tha..na wo waapis aata aur na tum sid ko divorce deti...jis din se usne tumhari zindagi me kadam rakha bas manhoosiyat hi faila di...

Ri- BASSS...bohut bol diya aapne...ab ek shabd aur nhi...khabardar papa aapne ek lafz aur kaha mere armaan ke bare me..kya kaha aapne usne meri zindagi barbaad krdi..usne nhi papa aapne barbaad krdi meri zindagii aapne...aapki wajah se mujhe sid se shaadi krni padi sirf aapki kyunki aapke liye aapki beti se zyada ye society ke words pyare the..aapki izzat pyari thi..aap jaante the armaan kya hai mere liye fir bhi aapne meri nhi suni...aapne saabit kr diya ki main aapki god li huyi beti hun...usi ka to wasta diya tha na aapne..aapki izzat ka..aapne muje meri saanson sse dur krdiya papa..aapne mujhe mere armaan se dur kr diya..accha hota agar zid ne meri jaan nhi bachayi hoti...

Shashank looked at her shocked..

Ri aise mat dekhi papa, meri shaadi ke din zeher khaya tha maine,kyunki arman ke alawa kisi aur ka hone ka soch bhi nhi sakti par zid ne meri jaan bachali aur sirf aapke liye aapki izzat ke liye mujhe meri khushiya meri zindagi ki qurbaani deni padi..par aapko ye sab kaha samajh aaya hoga aapke liye to aapki izzat zyada zaroori thi na...

Apko pata hai jab mujhe pata chala mera armaan waapis aa gya hai...main khushi se jhum uthi thi..bas daudkar uski baahon me jaana chahti thi..usse ladna chahti thi ki kyun wo mujhe chorkar gya...par main aisa kuch nhi kr paayi jaante h kyun ...aapki wajah se...aapki izzat kr liye...kyunki aapke liye main armaan ki basket se mRS MODI ban chuki thi..meri dil janta hai maine kaise khud ko armaan ke aage tutne se roka...aapne uski aankhen dekhi thi jab use meri shaadi ke bare me pata chala...uski aankhen sirf mujhs ek sawal puch rhi thi.sirf itna kehne ko keh rhi thi ki ye sab jhut h..aur main badnaseeb chah kr bhi kuch nhi kr paayi..

Aakhir kya galti kit hi armaan ne, kya gunaah tha uska yahi ki wo mujhe paagalon ki tarah pyar krta tha..ye ki meri acchi zindagi ke liye usne khudko mujhse dur krdiya.mere liye apni beemari se ladkar waapis aaya...ye galti thi uski...

Par aapko yaha par bhi uspe taras nhi aayana papa..ek bar bhi aapne uske bare me nhi socha na...aur meri shaadi sambhalne ki zimmedari use de di..kya beeti hogi mere armaan pe aapne kabhi socha.socha aapne kabhi..kya guzri hogi uspar mujhe kisi aur ki biwi bane dekhkar..muhe kisi aur ke kareeb lane ki koshish krte waqt..Tut  gya tha mera arman..aur main kuchnhi kr sakti thi..aap wajah the , ye society wajah  thi ki maine armaan ke saamne sid ko divorce nhi diya

...sid ko divorce dene ka to maine apni shadi ke din hi soch liya tha kyunki wo shaadi maine sirf aapke izzat ke liye ki  thi par main sid ki life barbaad nhi kr sakti thi...lekin jab armaan waapis aaya aur aapne fir usi pe zimmedari daaldi meri shaadi ki, main jaanti thi aap fir use hi blame krte, aap kya saari duniya mere armaan ko galat nazron se dekhti..uske pyar par ungli uthati..use khudgarz kehti/...ki uske wajah se meri shaadi tut gyi...usne meri shaadi tudwadi..aur log bolna shuru bhi kr chuke the...sanjeevani mein bohut se log mere armaan ko aise dekhte jaise ki wo bohut bada gunehgaar ho...akhir kya gunaah tha uska papa...Main sab kuch bardasht kr sakti thi papa sab kuch par mere armaan ko til til kr marta nhi dekh sakti thi..main jaanti thi ki wo tut jayega , bikhar jayega jab log uske pyar par sawal uthayenge..uski ridhima pe ungli uthayenge...isiliye maine who kiya jo main kabhi sapne me bhi nhi soch sakti thi..tod diya maine apne pyar ka dil...keh diya use ki maine sid ko chuna h..keh diya ki wo meri life ka hissa nhi.

.dur hona chahti hu main use..sirf uske khushi ke liye.kyunki main janti thi aaplog , ye society use chain re rehne nhi degi...manhoos wo nhi main hoon papa..main hoon manhoos..jabse uski zindagi me aayi hoon use sirf taqleef hi di..isiliye khud ko alag kr diya use...jaanti hoon bohut roya hoga wo, tut gya hoga...par ek divorcee aur ek manhoos ladki jo uske liye khushiyan kabhi nhi laa sakti..uske saath rehne se accha tha ki wo tutkar mujhse alag ho jaaye..

Ri- bohut roya hoga mera armaan, tut gya hoga..par mujhse dur hoke use uski khushiyan kabhi na kabhi mil jayegi ..par mere saath rehkar kabhi nhi...aur aapne meri har baat ko prove kr diya papa...jab aaj bhi aap mere armaan ko blame kr rhe...bas kriye papa..plz ab bas kriye..ab himmat nhi hai aur mujhme ..plzz aap jaiye yahase ...jaiyeee... (she cried bitterly and fell on her knees)

Shashank wanted to console her but felt he has lost that right, with teary eyes he left from there...Unknown to both of them there were four pair of eyes watching all this from the corner...

Ra- armaan he said ...his voice was breaking but he knew he has to be strong for his friends...he kept his hand on armaans shoulder>>>and armaan his eyes were red with anger..tears wanting to come out but he was not letting them...

Armaan didn't said anything just slowly walked towards ridhima..rahul knew its better to leave the both alone..time has come for them to sort out their differences...he slowly left from their making sure no one should disturb them..

Armaan slowly walked towards his life..his ridhima..his basket...her words ringing in his ears..she did all of this to protect him.didnt she know that he would refer the worse just to stay with her...his basket , his baby went through so much all alone...she tried to take her life...she was dying everyday but never let it show on her face...she became wrong infront of everyone..infront of him to protect him..tears fell from his eyes as he reached near her...

Ri- (she was still bitter crying)when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder..that touch she knew that touch..but was dreading to turn back..her heart was beating loudly wanting her to believe but her mind was not allowing her..

Slowly she turned...and time stilled for her..tears were continuously falling from her eyes...

Armaan slowly touched her shoulder , she slowly turned around, her face full of tears,her eyes wanting to believe what she is seeing but also fears it to be a dream..he can see all ,he can understand all through her eyes, all her emotions, all her fears...he was cursing himself that why he left her alone,, why he believed her words rather than his heart..his heart always told his basket loves him madly but.he aldo di that mistake but now its high time , he will correc this mistake...he also slowyly sat on his knees..facing her...

Ridhima fearing he would disappear slowly raised her hand and touched his cheek...feeling him..she closed her eyes and more tears fell ...

He saw all emotions on her face..when she raised her hand to touch him...tears falling like anything from her eyes..he slowly cupped her face and whispered..

Ar- ba..sket..

And that was it she just hugged him tightly crying her heart out...and armaan he too  took his baby in her arms cradling her...hugging her so tighly like trying to assure her that everything will be fine, they r together now and noone can separate them.

Ridhima was only crying taking his name...as if letting it all out..armaan also did'nt stopped her ..just took her in his arms and let her cry..his baby went through so much..now its over...now no one can separate the...he wont let anyone..not even her..

Ri- I m sorry armaan..i m soryyy...she said cryingly..

Arshhh bas basket...shhh bas mera jaan ...shh bas...

Ri- I m sorry armaan...main tumhe hurt nhi krna chahti thi..par main majboor thi...im sorry..

Ar- bas mera jaan bas...sshhh.,,he separated herself from her and said

Ar- aisa socha bhi kaise ridhima..kaise sochliya ki main tumhare bina  khush reh paaonga..kaisa socha tumne..ki meri zindagi me kkhushi tumhari wajah se nhi hai..

Meri zindagi tumse hai basket, meri saanse tumse h...ye armaan tumse h...

Ri- armaan  main tumhare laayak nhi hoon armaan..tum mere saath kabhi khush nhi reh sakte..main manhoos hoon armaan...tum mere saath kabhi khush nhi reh paoge..tumhe zindagi me mujhse better mil jaayegi ...is duniya ke liye ...main ek divorcee ho armaan..ek used ladki...jo tumhare kaabil nhi h...

Ar-(he had enough...enough of her blaming herself..now he have to make her understand) he just slammed his lips on hers...and that was it..he fiercely kissed her as if punishing her for using such words for herself..and ridhima as soon as his lips fell on hers..she forgot everything...

Kissing her madly..he slowly moved away and kept his forehead on hers..

Ar- aaj bol diya dobaramat bona ..tum sirf aur sirf meri ridhima ho...meri basket...jis tarah armaan ridhima ka tha hai aur humesha rhega...usi ridhima bhi sirf aur sirf armaan ki hai..

He took her hand and kept it on his heart.which was beating loudly.



Ar ise sun rhi ho ...aaj ke baad kabh bhi tum isse alag huyi ...to ye thak chukka hai tumhare bina rehke...tum isse alag huyi to yeh bhi ruk jayega...

Ridhima kept her hand on mouth...

Ri- armaan...

Ar- wada kro ridhima..ki aaj ke baad tum kabhi mujhse alag hone ka nhi sochogi...wada karo..tumhe meri kasam..

Ridhima  slowly nodded her head..and armaan took her in his arms...

Ri- I  luv u armaan..

Ar-  slowly kissed on her forehead...luv u too basket..


THE END

do give ur reviews guys..its my first try..

aleena

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