Tuesday, 23 June 2020

PART 19 : MY prediction for AR rest story

"Laye hum Hasi laye hum Khushi jee le phir se zindagi…
Taaron se aage hum jaayenge cheen le ayenge roshni …
Dil ho jahaan dost ho vahaan aisa manzar hain yahan…
Manzil nayi,rasthe naye …
Phir bhi chale,hum saath mein…
Hum toh chale the dost banke…
Jaane kahan dill mill gayye!!!!"


Next evening…

At tamannas house..
All r gathered for dinner…



AAYI:Achcha kiya jo sab bacha log aa gaye…chalo chalo haath muh dholo main khana lagathi hoon……
All enter the house…
AAYI:Tamanna..zara dekho beta…
TAM:Jee aayi….

Entering the house,,,

ARMAAN:So naina kaisa laga Dr.Shashank ka ghar..
NAINA:Bahut achcha hain.aur sab log bhi bahut achche hain..khaas kar padma aunty…unke haath ka khana toh mindblowing hain…especially….
ARMAAN:Aloo..ke parathe…
NAINA:( getting surprised)Arre..aap ko kaise pata hain……
ARMAAN:Wooh…aise hi…guess kiya…main abhi aata hoon….(he leaves making naina wonder..)

Sid is washing hands…tam is pouring water…
SID:Tamanna..wooh main tumse kuch kehna chahtha hoo….wooh main tumse…
TAM:Sid..hum,,,bhi tumse kuch kehna chahthe hain…
Sid thinks shes about to confess……..
TAM:(thinking its about that day sid is talking as she slapped him)I ..I (sid gets really excited)I am (sid thinks she will say "I am in love with u"

but..)I am really sorry us din ke liye..mujhe tumhe marna nehi tha…
SID: (getting all sad that she didn't say)Arre its ok…...wooh main toh..tumhe kuch aur..I mean..main main…

But they both get distracted by someones voice..

ARMAAN:Haan bhai ladki ke haath se jo khaye ho…toh Ok hi hoga..
TAM: Main abhi aati hoon…(leaving as her mom calls her)
SID: (cleaning hands)Arre dude kya kar diya tumne…ahchi bhali toh baat kar rahi thi….gaya mauka haath se….(throwing napkin hes cleaning)
ARMAAN:Lagtha hain mamlaa serious hain…(washing his hands)
SID:Haan dude kuch serious hi hain….
ARMAAN:Pyaar karthe ho usse…

Sid gets surprised first then…

SID:Pata nehi…shayad…par uske saath rehna,usse baatein karna,usse dekhna..bahut bahut bahut achcha lagtha hain..(armaan smiles)par wooh hain ki

mujhse baat ki nehi karthe ..main uske peeche bhagtha hoo,,aur wooh mujhse bhagthi hain..ek mauka mila tha..wooh bhi gaya ….thanks to u…(he grins)
ARMAAN:Abey yaar pyaar karna itna aasaan thodi hain..iskilye bahut saare formula apnane padega..
SID:Formula,,kaun sa formula..(he asks wondering)
ARMAAN:Matlab yeh ki …(thinks n says keeping hand on sids shoulder)tumahre liye toh formula no.109,,ladki ke jitne peeche bhagogi utna ladki tumse

door bhagegi….isliye…. tum usse ignore karo….
SID: (taking out armaans hand)Kya..main tamanna ko ignore nehi kar saktha…
ARMAAN: (keeping hand)Chupchap suno…tamanna se sirf professional baat karo..usse ignore karo..in short tum usse door raho..
SID:Isse kya hoga..wooh aur door chali jayegi…
ARMAAN:Nehi jayegi …wooh tumhare aur pass ayegi…mujhe ladkiyon ki physcology pata hain….(sid sees armaan differently n takes out hand n goes

far)…kya…(he sees sid n then comes near)arre,,,suno…hum unse door jayenge toh wooh confuse ho jayegi hi hum unse door kyun jaa rahe hain,,aur issi

confusion mein wooh tumhare aur kareeb aajayegi..aur hame ussi confusion ka fayda uthana hain…samjhe…

Sid doesn't say anything…

ARMAAN:Kya hua,,
SID:Lagtha hain main confuse ho gaya,,,
ARMAAN:Chal tujhe detail main samjtha hoon….(slowly to himself)lagtha hain yeh pura modi khandhan ko ladki patane mein problem hone…kuch solution

dekhna padega….
SID:kya…
ARMAAN: Kuch nehi…Sid agar tum sachche dil se chacho na toh sabkuch mil jayega..bas kuch..~~~~~~~~~~
Armaan keeps hands on sids hands n they both walk….


All were having dinner …

AAYI:Kya hua beta tu kha kyun nehi raha,,,aloo ki sabji achchi nehi bani..
YUVI:Nehi aunty bahut achchi hain..bas……..(Slowly naina whos near him hears) kisi ki yaad aa gayi…(he remembershis mother)
AAYI:Lee beta aur sabji le….(serves him more curry)
J.P:Aunty mujhe bhi..
ATUL:Mujhe bhi..
AAYI:Haan haan tumko bhi milega…(all laughs n enjoys food)

Aayi serves all while naina sees yuvi whos sad…

After dinner…

UMAR BHAI:Bahut shukriya ab sablog aaye..armaan beta bahut achcha laga tumhe yahan dekhkar…
ARMAAN:Arre yeh kya keh rahe hain..ab aap aaram keejiye..hum chalthe hain….bye tamanna..
NAINA/YUVI:Bye tamanna..
They both see eachother for saying at same time..
ATUL:Bye..
J.P:Good night flowerji…..
All leaves only sid n tam are left..so tam says..
TAM:Good night sid…
But sid doesn't say anything n leave without turning..though he want to..armaan sees him n gestures not to turn around.. ….yep..armaans formula

no.109!!!
Tam feels bad n goes inside ..still turning to see if sid will turn..but he doesn't…

Yuvi drops naina to shashanks house…she gets down n yuvi is busy checking out shashanks house…..when nainas words distract him..

NAINA:Yuvi,,tum theek toh ho na….
YUVI:Hmm..
NAINA:Tumhe kiski yaad aa rahi thi..(yuvi sees questioningly)wooh tumne tamanna ke ghar mein kahan na…??
YUVI:Wooh..(he gets serious first remembering his mother then smiles n says)meri girl friend ki ….bahut achchi cook hain…bahut tasty khana banati

hain..
NAINA:Tumhari Girl friend bhi hain..(annoyed)
YUVI:Haan,,,kyun milogi…tumhe uska khana taste karna hoga,,ek baar khoagi toh tum bhi nehi chodo gi…
NAINA: (gets really irritated,,,)Mujhe koi zaroorat nehi hain………main usse achcha khana bana sakthi hoon  ,,
YUVI:Tum aur khana..(laughing)
NAINA: (gets angry)Kyun main nehi bana sakthi….
YUVI:Haan haan agar phekne ke liye bana rahi ho toh mujhe kya problem hain…
NAINA:Tum..na ek number ke dafford ho…(stamps her foot n leaves inside)

Yuvi leaves….

NAINA:Main bhi dikhaongi tumhari wooh stupid girlfriend se achcha main paka sakthi hoon…bas mujhe kuch din chahiye…naina..tum iss dafford ke liye

khana banogi …chodo na…hmm,,par mujhe dikhana toh hoga ki main bhi kuch kam nehi hoon…

Yuvis house…yuvi comes n drops the keys on table n picks up the photo frame near it,,,its his mothers…

YUVI:Maa..tumhari bahut yaad aa rahi hain…(he wipes his tears)main uss insan ko chodogu nehi maa jisne hum sabki zindagi barbaad kar diya…


After few days…

Tams house ,tamanna getting ready to sanjeevni..praying to gods idol but she thinks of sid..instead..….n talks to god…

TAM:Yeh sid ko kya hua…usne humse kal baat hi nehi ki aur bahut dino se humse theek tarike se baat bhi nehi kar raha hain..…shayad kuch baat

hain..mujhe usse baat karni hogi…
AAYI:Pooja ho gayi tammu..
TAM:Pooja…(she hits her head at what was she thinking instead of doing puja n smiles to her self..)haan aayi..(she tells her aayi smiling n leaves..)


At sanjeevni…sid is roaming here n there in abhis room..abhi is working on his laptop n seeing sid roaming..

ABHI:Sid .. kya hua aise idhar udhar kyun chal kyun rahe ho……
SID:Kya batoa..
ABHI:Ab tum mujhe bataoge nehi toh main kya kar saktha hoon..
SID:Kya batau bhaiya..wooh Dr.Armaan ne mujhe fasa diya..
ABHI:Armaan ne ….kya kiya.. (getting up from his seat n coming near him)
SID:Wooh ..tamanna ko ignore karne ko kahan hain…ab tum hi batao..main tamanna ko kaise ignore karu…..wooh,,bura maan gayi toh..mujhse naraz ho

gayi toh….(he stops walking n gets tensed)
ABHI: Relax…..relax….(keeping hand on sids shoulder)Tamanna…tumhari co-intern..oho!!!toh yeh baat hain..kyun bhai …m.b.b.s se hathke ..loveolgy main

atke..…(he pats him more like beats him n laughs)
SID:Aisi baat nehi hain bhaiya…..
ABHI:Toh kaisi baat hain…arre khud ko dekh ..kitna badal gaya hain tu….kaisa houston ke NRI se pura desi ban gaya..tumhari tamanna ke liye na….
SID:Bhaiya..stop teaing me..
ABHI:Arre barkhudar…
SID:What does that mean………
ABHI:Kya..
SID:Bar-khu-whatever… see I am still NRI..
They both sit on couch…abhi laughs at sids childishness,,n talks seriously..
ABHI:Hmm..wooh..chodo….dekh sid pyaar mein logon ko bahut saari musibatein se ladna padtha hain…
SID:U mean like Miss..jiah !!!
ABHI:Haan....aise hi,,par itni bhi "badi" musibat nehi..

Both see eachother n laughs ,,,

ABHI: (back seriously)Pyaar pana itni aasaan nehi hain……bas agar sachche dil se chaho na toh sab kuch mumkin hain..
SID:Ya armaan dude ne bhi yehi kahan….,,
ABHI:Armaan ….Hmm..toh armaan tumhe bhi apna classes de raha hain…waise Armaan ki baat suno toh tumhe apna pyaar zarror miljayega…
SID:Kyun bhai nikki bhabhi ko aisi ki pataya kya…(winking)
ABHI:Sid…(he gets up seriously n then laughs)
SID:Bhaiya…armaan dude sab ki help karthe  hain.na…
ABHI:Haan wooh sabse achcha aur sachcha dost hain..
SID:I hope unhe bhi apna sachcha pyaar jaldi se mil jaye..what say…(he remembers something)ok bye I got to go now..doctor armaan ka next plan in

action karna hoga..!!

Sid gets up n leaves..,,leaving abhi think about sids words…..

ABHI:Haan..sid usse bhi apna pyaar jaldi hi mil jaye toh achcha hain….

At canteen:

Armaan was entering canteen to have sme break…

NAINA:Dr.Armaan..…….
ARMAAN:Haan naina…(coming to her table)
NAINA:Zara yeh kha kar toh dekhiye…
Armaan eats it..
ARMAAN::Wow!! Dhokla …its so tasty..

J.p hearing dhoklas name rushes towards her..

J.P: Dhokla (he eats it) bahut achha hain Flowerji..
ATUL:Guys kya ho raha hain…(he too eats it n all sits on table)  soo yummy…kisne banaya…padma aunty ne…
NAINA:Nehi..maine banaya hain apni haathon se…aunty toh busy thi sir ka kahayal rakhne mein..
ARMAAN:Kyun kya hua Dr.Shashank ko….(getting worried)
NAINA:Unka accident ho gaya..
ARMAAN:What?(shocked n all r shocked too)
J.P:Bahut chot aayi unka naina ji..
ATUL:Kaise laga…kahan laga…

From other table who was listening till now….n somewhere was smiling ..too…
YUVI:Accident hoga toh chot lagagi na…

All see him seriously,,but naina talk again….

NAINA:Nehi….wooh sir ka car ka break pata nehi kaise fail ho gaya…,,par thank god unhone time pe usse stop kiya nehi toh ped se takarane hi wale

the…unhe thode chot aaye hain..,,issliye thoda rest le rahe hain…..aur aunty unka khayal rakh rahe hain….bas…

Yuvis expressions change to frown n he thinks seriously…

ATUL:Thank god..!!(seeing armaan who is a bit startled n calls him slowly)Armaan..
ARMAAN:Haan..haan..
Atul tries to divert the topic…
ATUL:Yeh sab chodo..Naina tum toh badi achchi cook ho yaar..hume toh paat hi nehi..
NAINA:I know I am the best…pata nehi kyun kuch logon ko mere baare mein galatfehmi hain…(seeing yuvi on the other table who though hears was not

that interested)
J.P:Kiske baare mein baat kar rahe ho flowerji……(eating one more)
NAINA:Kissi ki nehi,,tum khao na… aur lo…

Atul sees yuvi whos serious n calls him..

ATUL:Arre yuvi wahan kya bete ho yaar aao na tum bhi khao………..
YUVI:Mujhe yeh faltu cheezon main interest nehi hain…
NAINA: (getting irritated)Faltu…(opening her open wide)

She gets sad as its only for him she made it n he calls it "faltu"……..

ARMAAN:Chodo na naina bandar kya jaane adrak ka swaaadd,,'
All laughs making yuvi irritated n naina gives a hi-fi to armaan to add more fuel to yuvis anger…
NAINA:Theek kahan apne Dr.Armaan…(laughing n seeing yuvi,yuvi sees naina seriously)
ARMAAN:Ok guys hume ab chalna hain…bye…
J.P/ATUL:Chalo…

All leaves…Naina is about to close the box when yuvi comes near her n takes one of it n eats it….she closes it n starts to walk away ignoring him…

YUVI:Naina…(She turns around)dhokla bahut achhi bani hain…
NAINA:Thank u …maine kahan na main achchi cook hoon toh hoon…tumhari girl friend se bhi zyaada……
YUVI:Wooh toh tum ho..(naina gets excited listening to it)Naina…yeh lo..(he gives some money)
NAINA:Paise kisliye…
YUVI:Main canteen mein khane ke baad bill pay kartha hoon….bye….
NAINA:Huh'''!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
He leaves saying it making naina get angry the most..she throws the box in her hand in air which hurts one of the ward boy..
WARDBOY:Ouch,,

Naina sees him n says sorry n gets away,,before creating a scene but she decides to teach yuvi a lesson…shes walking in a corridor..

NAINA:Aaj toh main iski khabar leke hi rahoongi…hamesha mujhe satata hain…stupid..idiot dafford……….

She hears yuvis voice n stops n hides behind a pillar n listens to it..

YUVI:Jee doctor main aaj shaam ko aaunga…

Yuvi leaves n naina thinks to herself..
NAINA:Ab dekhthi hoon kaise bachtha hain..hamesha mujhe blackmail kartha hain..aaj main bhi dikha doongi main naina mehtha hoo..aaj toh main jaan

kaar hi rahhongi yeh akhir uss mental aslyum se kartha kya hain………….

Naina has followed yuvi few times but never dared enter the mental aslyum..n saw from outside n left…she calls jiggy to come n …

NAINA:Hello..jiggy….meri baat suno…

Sid-tamanna:

Sid has been ignoring tamanna for quite sometime now n shes really irritated on him…she always tries to talk to him but he end up behaving like a

professional but he always used to talk nicely with other friends n this irritates her the most..she missed the happy-go-lucky sid n his stupid acts,,,she

though never understood why she was missing him…but when ever she tried to answer it she thinks him as a friend…or is it more than that??,,,,

Tamanna sees sid talking to some patients n behaving normally n making them laugh too…
She goes near him…

TAM:Sid..(he doesn't listen to her,,actually ignores her)sid ..sid…
She gets irritated and shouts,,
TAM:Dr.Sidhant modi.!!!!!!!!
He turns around keeping his hands in his ears…n takes out…
SID:Kya hain..tam..Dr.Tamanna.. "aap" aisa chilla kyun rahe hain,,dekhiye yeh ek hospital hain..yahan patients rehthe hain and by the way mera naam

"sid"hain,

Tam gets irritated now n drags him to path lab near ward where no one are there..

SID:Yeh kya kar rahi hain aap Dr.Tamanna…..
TAM:Sid.. wooh tum humse.. (she comes near him)
SID:Nehi……..aap is akele jagah mein mera fayda nehi utha sakthe..
TAM:(getting irritated by his stupid joke n comes more near)Sid…
SID:Nehi…maine appka kya bigada..
(Guys after all its armaans classes effect ..remember!!!!)

Sid closes his eyes n keeps his hand  before his face to avoid tamanna n to tease her..but soon he hears sobs n sees that tamanna is crying….

SID:Tamanna,,,tamanna(going near her n lifting her chinn wiping tears) I am sorry dekho main..wooh mazaak kar raha tha,,,
Tam sees sid n he catches his ears saying sorry,,
SID:I am sorry……
Tamanna stops her crying ..
SID:Thank god tumne rona band kiya..warna mujhe toh tsunami ki red alert almost sunayi dee rahi thi…
Tam sees sid seriously n he just keeps his finger on his lips…
TAM:Tum humse baat kyun nehi kar rahe the…
SID: (talking with his finger on lips)Kar toh raha hoon na,,,
TAM: (Removing his finger)Achcha ,,itne dino se hum tumse baat karne ki koshish kar rahe the aur tum humse baat hi nehi kar rahe ho,,humse door

rehthe ho….kyun sid…
SID:Kuch nehi bas aise hi,,,wooh main thoda busy tha na kaam mein,,(taking some test tubes n seeing them n diverting tam)
TAM: Achcha (taking from sids hand n keeping back) busy!! Tum sab se toh baat kar rahe the,,..J,P se …atul se.. yuvi se bhi…naina se..aur haa wooh

tumhari khubsoorat patient …dolly se,,.(sid giggles but seeing tam stops)mujhse kyun nehi karthe,,,,tum hume ignore kyun kar rahe ho sid..(she asks

genuinely confused with sids behaviour)
SID:Meri baat na karne se…..meri door rehne  se kya tumhe sach mein farak padtha hain..
TAM Haan..
SID:Kyun…
TAM :Kyun ki tum ..tum…(trying to find a reason)tum mere sabse achche dost ho..issliye….
SID:Sirf dost….
TAM :Haan…
SID:Tamanna kya hum dono main sirf dosti hain..mujhe nehi lagtha…(turning around n walking)agar sirf dosti hain toh..jo tum ab feel kar rahi ho …main

jo feel kar raha hoon wooh dosti nehi hain..yeh toh kuch aur hi hain……
TAM :Aisi koi baat nehi hain sid..hum bas….bas…achche dost hain..issliye mujhe tumahri firkar ho rahi thi,,,,

Sid goes near tamanna n holds by her shoulder..she gets surprised,,,he sees in her eyes n says….

SID:Tamanna..mujhe pata nehi tum mere baare mein kya sochthe ho…..par ek baat tumse kehna chahtha hoon…..sachche dil se…hum dono ke beech kuch

toh hain…..jo friendship nehi hain….yeh attraction hain ya pyaar…..(tamanna sees away from sids eyes listening to word "pyaar")ab tumhi decide

karo………….(he catches her hands)ab sab tumhare haath mein hain….

Sid leaves her hand…tamanna is just looking down unable to react…

SID:Mujhe pata hain tumhe waqt chahiye….and I am ready for it…..tumhara "faisla" jo bhi hoga…I will accept it….

Sid walks to door n turns around…

SID:Chahe tum usse hamari "dosti" ka naam do ya phir hamare …"mere" "pyaar"ka !!!!!!!

Sid left tamanna wondering n confusing what did sid just said……it was not like a confession nor a proposal but a question without an answer…an answer

which only she has…n somewhere down her heart she too knows it…

Yuvi-naina:

Outside mental aslyum….

Jiggy n naina are dressed like a detective n assistant to hide their identity…jiggy was really scared when he heard they were following yuvi … but he had

to accept cos he knows if he didn't go naina will kill him n if he goes yuvi will kill him…..so at the end hes gona be dead anyways…hehe…

Naina n jiggy are walking slowly near entrance…

JIGGY:Naina ek baar phir sochlo…kisine hume pehchan liya toh….(taking out specs)
NAINA:Tum itne darthe kyun ho..main hoon na..
JIGGY:Issliye toh aur dartha hoon..

Naina gave him a look n he got scared they try to sneak inside when the watchman stops them…they both get statrled n stops n gets into their

characters…

WATCHMAN:Ruko…kaun hain aap.. (beating his stick on his hand)
NAINA:Hume andar jaana hain..
WATCHMAN:Aap andar nehi jaa sakthe…sirf staff aur patient ke risthedar jaa sakthe hain…
NAINA:Dekhiye hume kuch zaroori kaam hain..
WATCHMAN:Nehi bina permisson ke aap andar nehi jaa sakthe…(he comes infront of gate)
NAINA:Dekhiye  aapko pata nehi hum kaun hain..
WATCHMAN:Kaun ho tum..
NAINA:Pehle batao tum kaun ho..
WATCHMAN:Ramu-watchman…
NAINA:Yeh hain the famous detective jignesh patel.. (Showing jiggy who was in full black dress n eating radish..hehehe)aur main unki assistant

naina…(with notepad in her hand)
WATCHMAN:Kya mazak samjah rakha hain apne aap ko karamcahnd aur kitty samjthe ho,,,,aur wooj dekho gajar ki jagah mooli kha raha hain…

Naina gets irritated at this n winks at jiggy to say something..

NAINA:Sir..aapne suna usne kya kahan…..usse humpe shak hain…(saying in dramatic way)

Jiggy doesn't say anything naina comes n hits his elbow..n whispers slowly..
NAINA:Abbe oye apna dailogue bol..
Jiggy reacts but..

JIGGY:Haan..naina…naina yeh hamari insult hain…chalo isse hamari identity dikhao..
NAINA:Identity..(hiting him again n whispering)ab yeh kahan se aayega…
JIGGY:Kuch bhi dikha do…(slowly)

Watchman sees them confused n naina keep her hand in purse n gets Id  card of sanjeevni… she just shows him quickly n takes back..

WATCHMAN:Par yeh tum safed coat kyun pehn rakhi ho..(confused)
NAINA:Wooh kya hain na,,(making up a story)jab maine yeh photo liye..tab aise hi kissi hospital ka investigation ho raha tha….(seeing around)aur tumhe

pata hain..hum kya pata chala….(coming closer)
WATCHMAN:Kya…(getting close to her)
NAINA:Uss hospital ke watchman ne ek 70 saal ki boodhi auarat ka rape kiya…aur uska murder…
WATCHMAN:Rape aur wooh bhi 70 saal ki budi aurat se…kya sundar ladkiyon ki kami thi..(he says casually checking out naina fully)
NAINA:Toh tum sirf sunderladkiyon ki murder karthe ho….
WATCHMAN:(Dead scared) Nehi nehi..hum toh bas aisi hi..murder…uske baad kya ua..
NAINA:Kya hona hain…uss buddi aurat ki bhoot uske aas paas ab bhi bhatak rahi hain…
WATCHMAN:Bhoot..
NAINA:Haan…bhoot…(coming near n amking him scared)
WATCHMAN:Haila..dekhiye humne kisi ka rape nehi kiya..na murder hume chod deejiye…
NAINA: (gets back)Hmm..dikhne mein toh sharieef lag rahe ho,,(seeing top to toe)..par,.,,wooh bhi aisa hi tha,,
WATCHMAN:Nehi nehi hum aise nehi hain….hum arrest mat keejiye..
NAINA:Theek hain ..kyun sir..(seeing jiggy)
JIGGY: (confused n seeing around n scared says)Haan,,haan.haan..

NAINA:Ok…waise..tumhe Dr.yuvraaj pata hain..
WATCHMAN:Yuvi babaa..arre itne sallon se aa rahe hain pata toh hoga na mensahab….
NAINA:Kya karthe hain wooh yahan….
WATCHMAN:Kyun unhone kuch kiya ,,
NAINA:Sir police ko bulayiye,,(to jiggy)
WATCHMAN:Nehi nehi.. uski zarrorat nehi hain..
NAIAN:Toh..batao…
WATCHMAN:Wooh toh milne aate hain..,,room no…41 ke patient hain na unse,,
NAINA:Theek hain.. hume kuch investigation karni hain ..chale sir..

Naina pushes jiggy but hes damn scared to go..

JIGGY:Naina main nehi aaonuga…
NAINA:Chalo jiggy..
JIGGY:Please naina mujhe chod de..
NAINA: Bhaad mein jao ( then she says to watchman)Hamare sir yahi rahenge nazar rakhne ke liye,,,main jaa ke dekhthi hoon..(she says strictly n

watchman agrees)

Turning to jiggy  n saying him..

NAINA:Jiggy tum isse sambhal main jaa kar dekthi hoon..
JIGGY:Par naina agar sach mein police aaagayi toh..
NAINA:Toh usse chor-police khelna ……bye..
JIGGY:Naina…..

Naina leaves leaving a confused jiggy n watchman…jiggy sees watchman n asks laughing..

JIGGY:Toh tumhara naam kya hain………ramu…
WATCHMAN:Huh'!!!!!


Naina is looking for room no.41..all around..

NAINA:Pata nahi yuvi yahan kyun aata hain aaj toh janna hi padega…

She sees the room ..

NAINA:Room no.41..yeh raha,,
She enters the room…n searches around..
NAINA:Hello..koi hain..yahan toh koi nehi hain…lagtha hain main galat room main aa gayi….wooh stupid watchman bhi na…
Shes about to go when she feels that she saw someones shadow at a distance …
NAINA:Lagtha hain wahan koi hain……..

Naina goes to the opposite side of room…where she sees it very dark,she ons the light n sees someone on wheel chair sitting…without any motion…she

gets scared n screams n closes her eyes…but then she opens her slowly seeing that the person has not moved from his position…she goes near to hin

slowly… and sits near him ….

NAINA:Aap kaun hain….aap mujhe sun sakthe hain……mera naam naina hain..yuvi ki girl…yuvi ki friend…aap unka kya lagthe hain,,,,

Naina keeps on asking questions but she realises that he has not talked nor moved from his place again…

NAINA:Pata nehi kya baat hain….hes not reacting…hmm..

She decides to check him….and takes out her stetscope from bag which she got in her bag by chance…shes about to check him when she hears a voice

from her behind…


YUVI:Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho,,
NAINA:Yuvi……………………(she gets up)
YUVI:Chali jao yahan se….(he drags her )
NAINA:Yeh kaun hain yuvi..(taking his hand out)
YUVI:Naina..maine kahan na..chali jao yahan se..(pointign door)
NAINA:Sach batao yuvi,,kya chupa rahe ho tum hum sab se…

Yuvi gets irritated n catches her hand n pins her to wall…..n shouts at her,,she gets scared n tears start flowing from her eyes,,

YUVI:Kyun tum mujhe akela nehi chodthi…haan kyun hamesha mere peecha karthi ho…kyun….
NAINA:Kyunki..mujhe tumhari fikar.hain..kyunki..main tumhe dukhi nehi dekh sakhthi hoon…..(she starts crying)

Yuvi leaves her…n gets back,,

YUVI:Kya karogi jaan ke..(he asks turning around)
NAINA:Please yuvi/..batao..shayad main tumhari kuch madad karu..please yuvi batao…Mere liye..
Yuvi turns around to see her…did she really mean it…he wondered,,
YUVI:Kya janna chathi ho tum ….
NAINA:Yeh kaun hain…(pointing the person in wheel chair)
YUVI:Yeh mere bhai hain…aviraaj singh..
NAINA:Bhai…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tumne kabhi bataya nehi….kya hua unhe..wooh aise kyun hain…(she asks worried though she could see n could understand as a

doctor she still wants to hear from yuvi)
YUVI:Unhe  paralyse stroke hua hain….,,,aur comma main chale gaye….,
NAINA:Kaise,,,,
YUVI:Ek doctor ki laparwahi se………(slowly…n tears form in his eyes)
NAINA: (keeping hand on his shoulder)I am sorry yuvi…I am sorry,main tumhe hurt nehi karna chahthi…main bas tumhari help karna chahthi hoon…
YUVI:Kya tum sach mein meri help karna chachthi hoo naina….(holding her shoulders)
NAINA:Haan yuvi…..main tumhare liye aur tumhare bhai ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayaar hoon….batao yuvi..
YUVI:Abhi nehi..jab waqt aayega tab bataounga…
NAINA:Ok…

They both leave n naina smile at yuvi for believing in her……..

YUVI:Tum bahut achchi ho naina……
NAINA:Tum bhi bahut achche ho,,bas yeh angry young man looks ko change karo…toh aur bhi handsome rahoge..tumhare bhai ki tarah..dekho wooh

kitne handsome hain…,,
Showing his brother..yuvi smiles …..
NAINA:Wow!!
YUVI: Kya hua,,kya kar rahi ho.
Naina takes out her mobile n clicks a pic…
NAINA:Tumhari hasi capture kar rahi hoon….pata nehi phir kab dikhega……sab isse dekhkar behosh ho jayege sanjeevni mein ..
YUVI:Naina..(he says strictly)
NAINA:Sachmein..
Yuvi smiles again,,
NAINA:Phir se smile…tumhari tabiyat toh theek hain…(she asks again teasing him)
YUVI:(wheeling his brother near bed)Main jab bhi apne bhaiyi ke saath rehtha hoon toh khush rehtha hoon…..unhe khush rakhne ke liye…
NAINA:Aaj se tumhare bhaiyi ko khush rakhne ki zimmedari meri bhi…..
Yuvi smiles at naina…n she too smiles..suddenly she sees her watch,,
NAINA:Ok yuvi ab main chalthi hoon..nehi toh Dr.Shashank se daanth padegi…..bye bhaiya… bye yuvi….

Naina leaves …jiggy is waiting for her,,
JIGGY:Kya hua naina..
She doesn't say anything n just smiles n leaves,,,and jiggy keeps calling her name n follows her..
WATCHMAN:Pata nehi andar yuvi babaa ne kya kiya hoga…(wondering n seeing inside)
NAINA:(To herself)Sorry yuvi maine tumhe galat samjha,,tum utna bhi bua nehi ho jitna maine samjha…tum toh bahut achche ho…(smiling)

Back at room…….

Yuvi sees naina going n turns to her brother n remembers flashback…

{Flashback}

Aviraaj is been taken on stretcher into operation threater,,,

YUVI:Bhai..bhai..aap mat jayiye…agar aap chale jayenge toh main kiske saath race karoonga…..
AVIRAAJ:Prince..rote nehi…..main jaldi se theek hoke aa jaunga….hum dono mileke race karenge aur dekhna iss baar main jeetonga…..aur tum haar

jaooge…
YUVI:Nehi bhai iss baar bhi main jeetonge..
AVIRAAJ:Achcha..theek hain toh lagi shart…(he kisses yuvi)
MOM:Beta,,,,
AVIRAAJ: (seeing his mom n catching her hand)Maa..apna khayal rakhna aur yuvi ka bhi…

It was the first time he said "yuvi" in many days…he only says it when hes sad or in bad mood..today he was sad….yuvi felt something is not gonna be

good…

SHASHANK:Aap chintha mat keejiye hum sab sambhal lenge…,,(assuringly0

Outside Operation threater…

Yuvi n his mon were waiting for now many hours..shashank comes..out sadly…..

MOM:Kya hua doctor…(anxitedly)
SHASHANK:Mrs.singh aviraaj zinda toh hain…par ….par ……..usse paralysis stroke hua hain aur ab wooh comma mein chala gaya…
MOM:Aisa nehi ho saktha…aisa nehi ho saktha…
SHASHANK:Hume puri koshish ki par hum usse bacha nehi sake..i am sorry ,,..usse,'~~~~~~~~~~~~~''~~~~

Yuvi was shocked,he couldn't hear what shashank was saying to his mother after that line… ….he just went near his brothers bed…and cried out his

heart..

Yuvi n his mother took aviraaj to their house n treated him but he never recovered…
His mother was sad with his brothers incident and after some years she too died thinking about his son…,,,yuvi cried a lot on that day too..,,,

{Flashback end}

His brothers last words rang in his mind…..he saw his brother who was now lying on bed..
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Hum dono mileke race karenge aur dekhna iss baar main jeetonga…..aur tum haar jaooge…
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YUVI:Main haar gaya bhaiya..is baar main haar gaya,,, Meri ek plan fail ho gayi par doobara nehi hoga..Bhaiya ab aapke gunegar ko jald hi sazaa mil

jayega…

He took his brothers hand n few tears fell on his hand..

He remembered shashank promise n how due to his neglience his brother was in this condition n his mother too died thinking of his brothers state..

YUVI: Dr.Shashank ab tumhare barbadi ke din bahut kareeb hain….,,,,,i am sorry naina…main majboor hoon…….


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